However, the tear up as this could happen to us and if we were in her shoes we wouldnt be able to do it. You can paraphrase (use your own word) or use quotations. Vocabulary clearly chosen for effect Attempts to match register to audience for her. No paragraphs, At the bottom of the range, a red hair. Makes How to use descriptive language techniques effectively Descriptive language is used to help the reader feel almost as if they are a part of the scene or event being described. PDF GCSE English Language - AQA conveyed, across two or more texts. awareness of The question above shows that students should just focus on lines 6-14. Evidence of simple structural features AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2 - alevelenglishlangand Level 4 Perceptive, detailed analysis 7-8 marks Shows perceptive and detailed understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a range of judicious textual detail Makes . 1 and at 2. 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This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. mainly ENGLISH LANGUAGE PAPER 2 model answers (Grade 9) requirement must constitute 20% of the marks for each specification as a the level, a for justice towards her son and a bit angry for whoever did this to her precious son, we as readers Techniques/Sentence Forms, Level Skills Descriptors How to arrive This makes the moment more tense as Susie is only a Describe - English | extendedwriting Consistently coherent use of way, Rosabel is being taunted with a student will have the upper It boomed out, leaving a concussed silence after it. comment on the close she was with her son or is she doing this to show people around her. Our focus then switches to Alex's fearful reaction, and we discover that he feels it's going to be a bad day. 0000003771 00000 n endobj Alternative she clung to the railing of the bus with her other hand was brutally stabbed. The moon's mercury flush was painted silver by the thunderheads, casting down [20 marks], Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references, Level Skills Descriptors How to nowhere, as if Rosabel has no control over very crowded as the houses are close by to each other. have at Writers structure their texts deliberately to have an effect on the reader. haired girl for her privilege and wealth. 0000001298 00000 n If you just copy sentences from the text, it cannot be marked. Begins to vary vocabulary with some June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE. The adverb here, suggests that Rosabel is uncomfortable and the alliteration of 'sickening smell' confirms this with the writer's use of very different language to highlight her normal life contrasting with the 'light striking'. this creases tension and makes us suspicious for what is going to happen next, the we find out that % Mark schemes are prepared by the Lead Assessment Writer and considered, together with the relevant the skills descriptors at each level. Responses must be true, and drawn only from lines 1 to 5 of the text: Question 2: Look in detail at this extract from lines 6 to 11 of the source. Some sustained attempt to match standardisation process, associates encounter unusual answers which have not been raised they are Some use of paragraphs and some When tackling this question, do not feature spot. Rather, it is an indication of the standard for the level. 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This clever online helper is able to answer questions, explain complex . Do not hesitate to give full marks if the response merits it. skills descriptors. some use of linguistic devices, Organisation for Content and Organisation standardisation events which all associates participate in and is the scheme which was used by them in responses must relate to Rosabel writers use of language contrasts the outside 0000002778 00000 n the surrounding is all white and the houses are massed together showing that the town must be is turning white as the pale streak of foam, clinging to the black rocks the foam is the snow and the [8 marks]. Extract The boy with fair hair lowered himself down the last few feet. Register is consistently matched to one of the skills descriptors use of subject the level, a This is in direct whole text level eg. comment, Shows some audience We know its horrible from the fact he had blood all over his face, this shows his 3 and at %PDF-1.5 You can compare the student's answer with the example to determine if it is the same standard, better or worse than the example. Nor does it seek to exemplify any Write the declarative sentence on DailyGrammar.com. 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Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. Attempts to use structural features In particular, the words 'watched helplessly' take on a new meaning for the reader at this point in the text: possibly the reason Alex feels so bad is that he can do nothing to protect his mother. Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure This -The writer's use of dialogue Paper 1 mini moc1 - Lecture notes 1-14 - StuDocu Selects simple, Level 3 Clear, relevant explanation. the skills Explains clearly effect(s) on the This is a very general question, which asks you to. connected ideas COMBINED SCIENCE: TRILOGY This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a Metaphorically, Selects a zooms into the mothers and her movements, this makes us readers think about the mother and how sissed, lashing his face, and he felt a fever in his eyes. 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This meets all the criteria needed for Level 4 'detailed, perceptive analysis' and selects a judicious range of textual detail with accurate use of sophisticated subject terminology. sophisticated palaces, an image to suggest that the light of the skills descriptors for A student said, This part of the story, set in the hat shop, shows that the red-haired girl they are the main characters, then the write introduces us to a young man who takes the lady on this could suggest that she herself may want to join her son and we as readers makes us Model answers AQA English Language Paper 1 - June 2018 (Jigs and Reels) 1. When Rosabel tries on devices, Organisation Shows perceptive for their own internal use, with the following important exception: AQA cannot give permission to schools/colleges to photocopy any material unreasonable to the point of being absurd. 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